 Re: Death Devil - Chapter I: Pages 1-2
Its cool, but there are a few grammar problems...
"To prevent from ever happening again"
should be
"To prevent this from ever happening again"
"So there is the stairs huh?"
Should be
"So, there are the stairs, huh?"
Parobably more, but I'm not too good at it myself...
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