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References: "A sprite comic I can understand, with a strong story and great mixture of epic moments and comedic moments.It makes for an overall great webcomic. A must read for sprite comic fans." -The Randomness"
Awsome job, keep it up. Rating: A+" - Gman
"This is the only sprite comic I can stand reading, its that good." -Kinspin
"I am very excited for this comics future." - Solar Sonic
"Not bad" -2nd Stamp
"OMG! Teh awesomeness." - Noble Talon
"I think that it is now great!" - The Dark Lord (aka Unknown)
"Lmao awesome story, i personally love those MS paint drawing, make more!" - Simon Beauchemin "8/10... Keep up the good work." SoGGy
"Pretty decent. Keep making more." - Highlander "The Team Zonic Adventure series will not only keep video game fans addicted, it offers the remedy of laughter to all readers." - Draconian
"The subtle (and sometimes not so subtle) humor really makes 'TZA' very enjoyable, I love it!" - Dynamic.Cranapple "nice comics, tone" - ThemasteR
"Best sprite comic ever ect" - Master Squall "Hi I'm Omega have we met? *offers hand shake*" - Omega52
"'TZA' and 'ASS' are the top comics in my opinion." - Swan
" I just like TZA better." - Izzy Dude
"Kudos once again Tony does great!" - Casey
"The main reason i voted for Tony is - strangely enough, his use of backgrounds.. I dunno whats with them, i just prefer them. Plus his comics employ comedy, which lightens them up a bit, which i like." - Raziel
"LOL, more tony. I really like these series." - Nightmare
"Fingah lickin good!" - Coulbe
"Nice comics Tony! Team Zonic Adventures 4EVAR!" Master Jetz
"nice comic tonyy" - Pringius
"Greatest Sonic Series Known to Man!!" - Sega
"Just brilliant." - Bill Gates
"I'm loving this series as much as I love myself!" -Edward Scissorhands
"TZA is the best comic ever to hit me in the face, literally!" - Pringius
Nice, I like how you drew him looking at the paper. You should use a different program to make these so that was when you draw like that the edges are smoother.
Overall I'd give Team Zonic Adventures a.......................8 outta 10 and four stars outta five. It's got a lot of potential and I can't wait to see it finished :]
Its a nice looking comic and all but the plot seems a bit out there and kinda slow to start up. And some comics seem more like a scene that should be in one
instead of being the whole comic like issue http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/9288/past4md4.png.
Its a nice looking comic and all but the plot seems a bit out there and kinda slow to start up. And some comics seem more like a scene that should be in one
instead of being the whole comic like issue http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/9288/past4md4.png.
Its ok lol
they're different pages, pal, not different issues
Team Zonic is sorta over used now. They have been in nearly every 1 of your comics! lol
they have, haven't they? Lol, i did Tuckles vs Pringius, Team Zonic jumps Highlander, Lance one, Kinspin show, this series, this one will keep the team zonic, i won't be making anything outside of this with team zonic unless it's a siggy or avy.
Team Zonic is sorta over used now. They have been in nearly every 1 of your comics! lol
Thats why I told him to make a series of this,Too many zonic on GTOF wars that I suggested to make this.
Tony your comics are excellent but try to use better SFX 9/10
about the PM...
I have read them
Heres the Rating: fours and a half stars
and the posts: Hi ya all... (wait a minute...)
Everybody wants to make sprite movies.. why dosent anybody make their own?
(with flash or panit or gimp)
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I don't do ratings. The rating is in the wording of my review. You'll have to settle for that.
Overall, I'd have to say I've been awarded with a sense of anticlimax. :p It's just kind of... I dunno... overly dramatic, lol. That, coupled with nitpicky things that I can never let go of - comma faults, MSPaint doodling coupled with sprites, and the strange Sonic character knockoffs (no offense to the "creators" of Zonic, Tuckles, and Sarge, btw), I was kind of put off of this thing from the first couple of comics. I came back upon request though, so here I am.
Graphics - The sprite backgrounds are fine, and in most cases, the sprites are too. But the hats look so dang out of place on those guys that I can't really say I LOVE the sprites. The edits on the expressions are kind of well-done, and I liked the special effects for the most part. I'd say the graphics are the second best part of these comics.
Storyline - Very bland. Eggman steals chaos emerald. Hedgehogs/Echidnas go after him/it. Hedgehog/Echidna gets super power up when all hope seems lost, and kicks Eggman's rotund rear. The day is saved. The peasants rejoice. It's hard to come up with a wholly original plotline with unoriginal characters. And by unoriginal, I mean likenesses of existing ones, like Sonic, Knuckles, etc. It just seems altogether NORMAL for them to go chasing after Eggman for stealing the emeralds. An even better plot would have involved a different enemy, with a different purpose, at the very least. But that's just my opinion. Despite all that though, the storyline was kind of interesting as the comic progressed, so I'll say it was the best part of the comics.
Language - Deplorable. Really, the grammar needed work, and the flat, unexpressive verbiage of the characters really pulled away from the drama. I'm no great lyricist myself, but I find it hard to get involved when the characters are just like, "Just accept your fate. I am going to win." "I guess you're right..." Lol. But really, all that didn't bother me as much as the commas. xD Seriously man, commas aren't used to divide independent clauses. You can use semicolons for that; you can also use periods (a.k.a. full stops). Or you can simply add an "and" in there to connect the two phrases. In that case, the comma is acceptable. :p
Sorry to be nitpicky, but that's how I am. You brought this upon yourself when you started PMing people for feedback. I tells it like it is, babycakes.
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I don't do ratings. The rating is in the wording of my review. You'll have to settle for that.
Overall, I'd have to say I've been awarded with a sense of anticlimax. :p It's just kind of... I dunno... overly dramatic, lol. That, coupled with nitpicky things that I can never let go of - comma faults, MSPaint doodling coupled with sprites, and the strange Sonic character knockoffs (no offense to the "creators" of Zonic, Tuckles, and Sarge, btw), I was kind of put off of this thing from the first couple of comics. I came back upon request though, so here I am.
Graphics - The sprite backgrounds are fine, and in most cases, the sprites are too. But the hats look so dang out of place on those guys that I can't really say I LOVE the sprites. The edits on the expressions are kind of well-done, and I liked the special effects for the most part. I'd say the graphics are the second best part of these comics.
Storyline - Very bland. Eggman steals chaos emerald. Hedgehogs/Echidnas go after him/it. Hedgehog/Echidna gets super power up when all hope seems lost, and kicks Eggman's rotund rear. The day is saved. The peasants rejoice. It's hard to come up with a wholly original plotline with unoriginal characters. And by unoriginal, I mean likenesses of existing ones, like Sonic, Knuckles, etc. It just seems altogether NORMAL for them to go chasing after Eggman for stealing the emeralds. An even better plot would have involved a different enemy, with a different purpose, at the very least. But that's just my opinion. Despite all that though, the storyline was kind of interesting as the comic progressed, so I'll say it was the best part of the comics.
Language - Deplorable. Really, the grammar needed work, and the flat, unexpressive verbiage of the characters really pulled away from the drama. I'm no great lyricist myself, but I find it hard to get involved when the characters are just like, "Just accept your fate. I am going to win." "I guess you're right..." Lol. But really, all that didn't bother me as much as the commas. xD Seriously man, commas aren't used to divide independent clauses. You can use semicolons for that; you can also use periods (a.k.a. full stops). Or you can simply add an "and" in there to connect the two phrases. In that case, the comma is acceptable. :p
Sorry to be nitpicky, but that's how I am. You brought this upon yourself when you started PMing people for feedback. I tells it like it is, babycakes.
I kinda agreed with you.
This is constructive criticisim
Shuko: It's not over, don't worry, this is just for starters, i will have more characters for destruction, etc. I have lost my ability to sense independent clauses, etc. It's been far too long since i worked with them, since middle school really. I have more coming in on this comic and since my computer's been fixed, it will start up again (most of my work and things to work with is on this computer). Also, I appreciate the thorough work behind it all, nothing bothered me in there, im not much of a grammar god like Noble Talon, but that's just how it is. I still try my best in trying to make it better.
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Very nice so far, but don't forget to always add some twist to the stories, they will keep the viewers interested
Oh you wouldn't believe the twists i will be putting in the story, lol
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But that's just my opinion. Despite all that though, the storyline was kind of interesting as the comic progressed, so I'll say it was the best part of the comics.
keep it up :thumbsup:
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